My name is Nicol Roa and i was born on December 14, 2000. As a second daughter of two children
I lived in Bogotá- Colombia since i was born with my father Fredy, My mom Laura, and my
brother Andres who have been an unconditional support for me in my entire life.
I started to study at school when i was 5 years (or so i tkink) and over time i have shared my process
with different amazing people thet life has allowed me to know. I have two best friends one i know
eight years ago and the other fourth years ago, both fill my life with happiness, they are like my
brothers and i have always received the unconditional support of them in every moment.
My hobby is speed skating , go shoping, go cinemas, and go around the city to walk at night
because for me it is the best treatment to get rid of the bad days and bad energies that i received
during the week.
I love listening music, share moments with my friends, go to stadium, the cars, and traveling.
I am a person who has a big dream, always trying for to reach big a achivement and one of my big
goal is to achive my tittle of filmmaker, make many contributions to society and travel around the
world.
I am an optimist girl, i hate talk about someting in front of public and always try to follow the
advice of my parents beacuse they always know when something is convenient.
I always try to give the best especially for myself and for the people who prove to be with me in the
good and bad. My family ar my spirit and the best event in my live was when my nephew was born.

Nicol this is a good biography but be careful with the use of tenses, You confuse the use of the present and past tense.
ResponderBorrarIt is also important to revise the use of capital letters.
Your grade is 80